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From: "Luiz Fernando N. Capitulino" <lcapitulino@mandriva•com.br>
To: junkio@cox•net
Cc: Git List <git@vger•kernel.org>
Subject: [PATCH 4/5] core-tutorial: minor fixes
Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2007 11:18:28 -0300	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20070425111828.3e66c3f3@localhost> (raw)

- Do not break the line when it's not needed
- s/Your/You

Signed-off-by: Luiz Fernando N. Capitulino <lcapitulino@mandriva•com.br>
---
 Documentation/core-tutorial.txt |    9 ++++-----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/core-tutorial.txt b/Documentation/core-tutorial.txt
index 97cdb90..6b9b9ad 100644
--- a/Documentation/core-tutorial.txt
+++ b/Documentation/core-tutorial.txt
@@ -319,10 +319,9 @@ argument to `git-commit-tree`.
 `git-commit-tree` normally takes several arguments -- it wants to know
 what the 'parent' of a commit was, but since this is the first commit
 ever in this new repository, and it has no parents, we only need to pass in
-the object name of the tree. However, `git-commit-tree`
-also wants to get a commit message
-on its standard input, and it will write out the resulting object name for the
-commit to its standard output.
+the object name of the tree. However, `git-commit-tree` also wants to get a
+commit message on its standard input, and it will write out the resulting
+object name for the commit to its standard output.
 
 And this is where we create the `.git/refs/heads/master` file
 which is pointed at by `HEAD`. This file is supposed to contain
@@ -1304,7 +1303,7 @@ So, we can use somebody else's work from a remote repository, but
 how can *you* prepare a repository to let other people pull from
 it?
 
-Your do your real work in your working tree that has your
+You do your real work in your working tree that has your
 primary repository hanging under it as its `.git` subdirectory.
 You *could* make that repository accessible remotely and ask
 people to pull from it, but in practice that is not the way
-- 
1.5.1.1.320.g1cf2

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