Subject: [GSoC PATCH v3 0/3] doc: improve gitprotocol-pack

From: LorenzoPegorari <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 3 Mar 2026 02:45:45 +0100

While studying the `gitprotocol-pack` documentation, I found various
small style inconsistencies.

These patches are just tiny, simple improvements, mostly to improve the
clarity of the documentation.

V3 DIFF:
 * Fixed final patch to properly conform command and process names to
   italic format, instead of the inline code format
 * Fixed typo that I forgot to change in v2

LorenzoPegorari (3):
  doc: gitprotocol-pack: fix pronoun-antecedent agreement
  doc: gitprotocol-pack: improve paragraphs structure
  doc: gitprotocol-pack: normalize italic formatting

 Documentation/gitprotocol-pack.adoc | 18 ++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

Range-diff against v2:
1:  0d679e5eb5 = 1:  0d679e5eb5 doc: gitprotocol-pack: fix pronoun-antecedent agreement
2:  8a6b5d4c98 = 2:  8a6b5d4c98 doc: gitprotocol-pack: improve paragraphs structure
3:  6410967d65 ! 3:  2cf8a13eaf doc: gitprotocol-pack: normalize italic formatting
    @@ Documentation/gitprotocol-pack.adoc: two commands, or even just one of them.
      In an ssh:// format URI, it's absolute in the URI, so the '/' after
      the host name (or port number) is sent as an argument, which is then
     -read by the remote git-upload-pack exactly as is, so it's effectively
    -+read by the remote `git-upload-pack` exactly as is, so it's effectively
    ++read by the remote 'git-upload-pack' exactly as is, so it's effectively
      an absolute path in the remote filesystem.
      
             git clone ssh://[email-masked]/project.git
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