Subject: Re: [PATCH 06/11] MyFirstObjectWalk: update recommended usage

From: Junio C Hamano <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 07 Mar 2022 08:47:59 -0800

Derrick Stolee <[email-masked]> writes:

> Definitely room for improvement here. I got hung up on the two uses of
> "it" so here is another attempt:
>
>  If its `filter` member is not `NULL`, then `filter` contains
>  information for how to filter the object list.
>
> What do you think?

Sure.  I won't get hung up on three uses of filter here ;-)

The above reads well.

Thanks.